This was absolutely great, it touched me deep inside and has nearly moved to tears.
Keep up this sensitive work !

Sabine

This poem was pretty good
I think there were some errors..
i mean where the rhyming seemed a bit forced
but that's ok
you did a good job
5/5

Oh, so sweet.
this seems like something i've thought of before, like all of this was going through my head... wow, youre pyschic!
anywho... i love the subject, the rhymes were great... but again, the flow seem a little jumpy, not too much but it threw me off a little... amazing job with this one
5/5

This was just beautiful. The emotions described were so powerful and deep.

"In tears I begged you to come just this one last time,
forget your hate and I will forgive your crime."
^That was my fave lines, they flowed beautifully.

Well done *5/5*

Another sweet poem you have here. Again, it really shows your strong love for this person and you penned this very well. Put a smile on my face to see such love for someone. :]

Tammie

"I close my eyes and whisper these last words to you,
for I have and will always love you."

^^I don't like that ending.

The flow is flawless throughout the entire piece right up until there were you rhymed ''you'' with ''you'' and it disrupts it terribly.

Apart from that however, this is perfect.
It's beautiful and heartfelt, and written very well.