Comments : Why?

  • 19 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    WOW. I really enjoyed this. it was written very well, it has a good flow and rythm and i liked the contradictions through it. i especially like the first lines, they were unexpected and deep. tacke care. xmollyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    great job, well written

  • wow this was I really good poem..I could really put myself in it..great job!! Keep on writting, I really enjoy your stuff!^_^

    x-Shannon-x

  • 19 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    This is really good... I ask myself those questions like a million times a day.... and i think ..These questions will remain unanswered,
    And I'll just leave them to be...
    The answers will remain unspoken,
    Until you listen to me... that is the best answer i've ever heard to it... great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    Wow...them first two paragraphs are f**kin awesome!! Everyything u said in just them 2 was soo true about the feeling!
    Nice Work
    keanna

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    I do not know you at all but u r important this poem is really sad omg it upsets me but its good well im gonna go check me out sometime ok buh bye love jess

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    Hey, I have an answer for you...I cant guarantee its right...but I have the same questions...its cause evryone does! We dont really know who we are, its like were on earth...but were not like we know who we are...but we dont understand it. I know it may not make total sense...but if you think about it for a while you might get what I mean, but your not alone atall!! I promise!! there are sooo many people that ask the same things and feel the same way! It is an excellent poem though!! keep up the great work!! I loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamal C Pennie

    Very powerful, I love this kind of poetry....filled with emotion and sorrow......Excellent...hands down!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow this poem is incredible...It's like you've read my mind almost...I have many a same questions.....You wrote this so perfectly...it flowed flawlessly and was well put...Good job xxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    Great poem, I could never write anything that good...According to your profile, you're not doing okay now...I feel you, I honestly do. I know the pain you feel...And if you ever need someone to talk to, I am willing to listen.

  • 19 years ago

    by insane authority

    o godd!!!! that so relates to me..sometimes..neways yes im listening? lol nice poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    oh my god that poem is so good...okaye your like my idle lol lol but yah like im me kk joannizmainame56@aol.com and i can reely relate to that poem...and i will forever listen...

  • hey ya hunny..........i love this poem......u are a brilliant poet well dune my work can never b as gd as this xx....i understand how your feeling and im glad you write a poem like tht.......so many unanswered questions....its a feeling ive felt 4 a long time.......this poem has loads of emotion well i understand hw u feel.....and as u see u hve loads of people who love your work and are willing 2 help you.....xxx

    Take care
    **~Natasha~**

  • 19 years ago

    by kirsty

    hey may not know you butthat poem is soooo true and the ending is more than enough to explain it. maaaan ur awesome at this stuff i could never do any thing as good as that

  • 19 years ago

    by kirsty

    i'll listen i know ur pain hunni

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    love it