Nigh prophetic tone and wonderfully gothic. Great poem.

Nice :) this poem really paint the picture in my mine, Im a bit lost on the meaning but I still like it :) Keep up the good writing :) Take care.

Heh, Well heres a little background on it then. Two other friends and I play an MMORPG (Massively Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game) and in it, we play as the "Ravenbourne" Family. I was bored one day so I created a background legend for our little family and in turn I wrote this poem as a bard-like tale. You would have to read the story of the game and the story I wrote to get the poem, but its pretty cool. If you want to see the stories, you can email me, but if not, just think of this poem as a long forgotten legend.

--Bryce~

i like this poem very much- a bit worry, that you don't rhyme it to through to the end, but nevertheless great

can you tell me which mmorpg you play?

Yes. Its called Tibia. Its actually quite fun, but hard to get on to during the day. I usually play later in the evenings.

--Bryce~

Long time no talk Byrce, I miss you :), anyways I agree w/ FTS Miles. What a great poem, you still havn't lost your touch! Keep in touch stranger.