i sincerely love your poem... i felt as if you were talking to me when you mentioned the hazel eyes... im a sucker for good eyes... anyway keep up the good work *wink* toodles

awesome! truly great! loved it! very well written! keep in touch
lexi lou

Well written, I liked it a lot. When trying to convey a message like this, it seems almost childish to use couplets. Thats just my two cents though.