Comments : Jaded

  • 19 years ago

    by Manda

    I like your Poem, but just a few parts got me tongue tied. I have written many Poems like this, like my Poem "Tears". Love isn't so bad, once you learn that it will come and go.

    |With Love|
    -Manda

  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    This was an excellent poem. I'm sorry that you're going through this...You don't deserve it :(
    "it would be you to complete me,
    but only have I been
    torn apart,
    I try to mend the pieces
    of what's left of my heart.
    I loved you,
    with everything I had,
    I never dreamed
    you would hurt me so bad."
    That was my favorite part. You're truly amazing (though I've probably said that a few times before)