Wow, very dark. Well, written though and I like it alot. I would love for you to read mine and tell me what you think. Thanks!

AMAIZING....i dont know wat to say. i'll string my emotions into a meaningful sentence and type it as soon as i can...bye

great... ilove the way you put the truth of emotions into words...

sincerely,
BlackRose... a.k.a. the beauty in death

Beautiful poem. I love the whole lullaby part to it. Is there actually..a little tune, or what's it called, that goes with it? So..you could sing it. I know I seem really stupid right now, but I don't know much about music, so I don't know what it's called. Anyway, you write beautifuly. Keep writing, because I love reading your poems.

WOW! Very creativly written, very meaning ful, original and a good choice of words!
Very well written!
5/5