wowow!! awesome seriously!! that rocked...its so beautiful :), its amazing n ya wish fantasy land did exsist lol!

good poem. it was different, and different is good. i do think it could have been a little better tho, i can see you writing great pieces. keep going!

Hey there,

i must say you impress me with you comments on my poems, i actually made some corrections...so Kudos to you!

Right then, i liked this one, good strong philisophical issue, not to blatant, not to abstract.

The only thing that seemed odd was the syllable count on certain lines, like the first line of the 3rd stanza....maybe you could chop a few words..aside from that, sweet.

You are now on my favs...yeah...i know...what an honour!

; )