Comments : OutCast

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    I beleive we draw events and people into our lives by our thoughts. Some people like me, do this on purpose, in a conscious way...we draw good things. Others, and one of my friends falls into this category, seem to draw negative things without actually wanting to deal with them...but it's the same process.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I don't know what silly person gave this a 1, it was very good in my opinion. Great description throughout it- especially:
    I see you fish with phantom limbs
    snatching thoughts and random whims

    But in your first stanza when you right "theirs you" is that suppose to be "there's you"? Correct me if I'm wrong.
    Another good poem ^^ I give it a 5!