Comments : To Nicole

  • 19 years ago

    by Kay

    OMG! wow i honestly dont know what to say. i see you almost every day and not once do you look like the kind of person that feels that way. that put tears in my eyes honestly. (so if you see me after this period and my eyes look alil red thats why) lol that was really sweet, keep it up! love ya!
    ~Kay~

  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    Aww this is so sweet! I especially love the lines "To find that your not here with me
    Leaves me torn apart
    And even though i try to free
    What lays within my heart
    I find I'm constricted by chains
    Created by myself
    From insecurities and pains
    That through my life I've felt
    And i hope you know I try
    Just to let you know
    Cause i find saying goodbye
    Is not the way to go" B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L Writing m'dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Nice work, as always, maybe not your best, but still great poem!