with it not being true makes it that much better. You were able to convey emotions with out feeling them personally. Great jpb, keep up the good work. take care

I love it :)

Great work Jackie! I never thought I could write from a title... but when I started getting titles from a firend, I found that it really stretched my poetic muscles...

this is very nicely written! I love the repeating "chorus"... nice touch!

:) Well, good thing this poem is not true :D... but hey, thats really cool how you can just write such a good poem from a title thats given :) such a good talent, you keep it up girl. take care.