Really heart felt and sweet dedication to your mother this poem - great work. I have a bit of feedback for you tho - my advice is to be careful for spelling mistakes (use the spell check engine on the sight and proof read your work before posting) also set the format of your poem how you would like the reader to read it (separate lines, keep grammar in mind also) besides that I think you have done a wonderful job that your mum would be proud of :o)
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