that was awsome. you got a serious gift. If i could id hug u right now. b/c your not afraid of emotion! keep it up.

that was awsome. you got a serious gift. If i could id hug u right now. b/c your not afraid of emotion! keep it up.

"Numb your feelings, vacantly stare
It's not like anyone really cares." i really liked those lines. pretty good job, i liked the imagery and symbolism, good job

wow...amazing poem love...so sad...but so well written...keep writing doll xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

wow. this poem is amazing. it really is. it makes death seem so much easier than life. which it is. i feel very much the same.

wow, ALL i can say is "POWERFUL", I loved it..great work!! great great work!! keep it up!
luv elizabeth

I loved this poem!! It captures a wistful, suicidal emotion while still weaving up some excellent imagery. The last stanza was just a perfect wrap to the poem... well done.

thank you for all your comments... you don't know how much I appreciate them..... :)