Comments : Confusion

  • 19 years ago

    by kid.baby.

    I like the bit you wrote at the end, when you say that you twisted you words and that people won't understand, makes sense with the title Confusion. Maybe no one gets you except you

  • 19 years ago

    by kid.baby.

    ps. really great poem and just pure I guess, emotion and reality! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Armed-Alcoholic

    Brill poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    And I would fix my damaged wings
    If I found them worth enough to fly
    But the weakness in my body
    Has taken away my effort here to try

    i really find that this stanza was really deep and sometimes, i feel the same...i dont really understand the poem cuz you kept sayin that the person was pretending and then you went on like he/she was for real...but i thought that the word play and just the whole thing in general was excellent, keep your head up...