WOW WOW freaking bloody WOW I wish i could give you more than a five for this originality on its own - thats it your worthy of my faves Dark Saviour, I have so much to comment on this poem but will not take away from the amazing words I have just written and will conclude by saying EXCELLENT POEM - Eirisa

WOW WOW freaking bloody WOW I wish i could give you more than a five for this originality on its own - thats it your worthy of my faves Dark Saviour, I have so much to comment on this poem but will not take away from the amazing words I have just written and will conclude by saying EXCELLENT POEM - Eirisa

thank you very much for both of your wonderful comments, this one really hit home as my grandfather was a coal miner who caught black lung, it is a disease from the mines that you get where all the dust you breath in turns your lungs black and you get lung cancer.

Thank you very much for your kind words.