i thought your poem was gret excellent poem. i can relate to your poem because i just lost my girlfriend to her ex that is moving back up to see her and be with her anywayz great poem i really enjoyed your poem and i hope to read more if you want to read mine they are under my name bobby brownlie

i loove ur poem!
its really nice!!
u can read mine too under my name sugar cane!
good job ~! i like it !