Excellent!!!!

I loved the last 8 lines of this poem. they were very deep. Really made me think. Great job. What can i say, the world IS really shallow. xmollyxx

That is a beautiful poem! My boyfriend and I have been together for 5 years and he is a black man so I know just what you talking about.....We get it too...Fortunately our families don't mind. But just going to the store, any where, the way people look kills me. Just today he came to my job to eat luch with me and we went to an ice cream shop and the old women coming in there looked at us as if we were absolutely nothing. It hurts I know and I wrote that poem because when I was in school I hung with a lot of his friends and I had a lot of black friends....anyway a lot of people called me white girl and I hated it.

excellent poem. it's sweet and unique! keep it up. take care:)