great poem

That was a good poem..i can relate jay..i've lost best friends before. I like it alot!

This was really good. I could really get a sense of the character in this poem. The emotions were strong and the words you used just added to the beauty of the poem. The regret..the loss.. it was really sad, yet true.

Astryd

I just love the first stock of stanzas.. the background of your poem..it makes this one such a coherent piece. The way words strung each other makes it a well cohesive and lexically strong piece. Great work!

Tc
Fsams

Aw, this almost made me cry.
It's such a sad poem.
Love the word usage and the flow was just amazing.
Great job!
5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Wow, very descriptive. I like how you were able to use emotion as well as thoughts. Excellent piece. Love the way that this piece was written

Love it. Great way of writing and good descrpition.