OK...I liked the poem alot and unfortunately there was one thing that REALLY pissed me off. The wasy you spelled "steel". It should be "steal". I won't vote on this now but tell me when you change the "steel" to "steal" and I'll give you the 5 you deserve.

lol ya

One word... POWERFUL! not many poems can just give off an air of power and beauty. Loved it, seemed like it could make a good song!

dude,your a good writer,your work looks better than mine.keep writing,i gave you a 5.