~*~good job, you have a really good choice of words on uore poems, really deep poem but you know, don't hang uoreself, i tried to once and than so many things ran through my head when i did and than i felt liek i wanted to live but i was losing my breath and all and than my mum found me and i was glad she did, but than now my life is going down the shitter again, but owellz~*~

a great poem. keep it up and take care! =)