well done. <3 emz x

hey nice poem, strong emotions nice! Thanx for reading my poem, don't worry if i get my wings ill ask god to give you some too ok! Keep up the good work okay... ciao..

Wow.... that was very emotional. Nicely written. This part was probably the best:

"These nightmares and visions

Will not seize to disperse

Caged in confusion and heart ache

Maybe laid there"

Very descriptive! Beautiful job. To improve, you could try to make the rhythem more consistent; make each line about the same number of syllables. Other than that, great job! I can't beleive not one person has voted on this! definatly a 5/5. Keep it up!

-Cheerfully Cynical