great poem! even though it's a song. . . i think cuz it really sounds like 1! either way you wrote it great! if it's supposed to be sung or read i really like it! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

It's really good yeah.
Take care

xx - Kalah

All bad dreams eventually end..good right and always try to smile, it helps!
*HEather

I really liked this one, its probably one of your best. Very well written. You have great potential. I can't wait to read more! ^_^

-Cheerfully Cynical-