That was so vivid! I loved it! I felt a lot of hidden emotion in it. And I think that its really cool...great job! keep it up!

wow...........i have no words to describe this poem. its.....amzing, fantastic, i cant put into words how beautiful this is, its absoluty incredible. Probably my favorite from you, a strance i really like, "But somewhere within the song
A beat changes, and they must go
I only notice when it's too late
And I must dance again solo"
wow, i loved how you added the solo part, it says so much. i wish i could put into words how incredible this is because it definetly deserves the praise but there are no words beautiful enough to describe it. i guess all that i can say is thank you for posting such a breath taking piece of work....utterly amazing.....

wow....I love this poem...keep up the good work

That was awesome!

Amazing poem, the visuals I get are amazing, very discriptive. Keep up the good work

Good job :)

Wonderful poem...very dark :) keep up the good work. Much love<3 tori*