nice :-)

I like the flow and the originality of it. The last line tingles and is a nice ending to a sweet poem :)

so stupid srry

thank you ppl , its soo encouraging 2 have comments like these..
--chavii--

"if love is poetry, i am the poet
if love is you, make me your lover...... "

Excellent ending!!
I loved the whole "If love.." aspect, it was so refreshing to read
5/5
*Gem*