Comments : FORBIDEN LOVE

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very nice poem. yes, interracial love is as beautiful as the normal one. some spelling mistakes here and there but the message is great. keep it up. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    i like ur poem!!
    its nice ... and amaazing!! keep it up gurl!
    by the way : thanxx for ur comment! ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    You spelt 'knows' wrong.

  • 19 years ago

    by kirsty

    i enjoyed reading this poem as it tells a story in a way and it's true about interracial love. people dont see the underneath just the skin. it'a not fair.

  • The poem itelf was fair, but the message was great. You had some spelling mistakes in there. Overall I thought it was pretty good. WHy would they shun interracial love? I am so ethnically mixed i don't look like anything really.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    thanxxx for ur e-mail :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    There were way too many spelling mistakes for me to give this anything but a one. WHERE=WE'RE, TO=TWO, NOES=KNOWS, IT=IT'S

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Good concept, but I agree with everyone else on the spelling. Keep writing.. I look forward to reading more

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Amazing poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    morgan i love you so much