awww... yet another beautiful poem written by you Alysse :)... can feel you sadness through your words, good writing :) You are really good that this none-rhyming poems... oohhhh, Im sooo jealous, I've always wanted to write one but... always failed... :/ oh well :) keep up the good work, take care.

thanx allen, the trick is not to force it but when u feel the inspiration then it kinda just flows it...uno?? am i looney