Comments : Make Believe

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem was a good poem. I enjoyed the read and it was a nicely writen peice it is different from most i read so it is a change from the everyday sort of poems i read. I am sorry that you feel like that *yes i picked up on the metaphor*.

    Things will pick up soon enough dude. they always do.

    Be well, Be Safe.