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  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Brilliant poem...I enjoyed this one a lot...U have got some serious talent...take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Nicely doen, I can feel you emotion through your words, keep up the good work, take care :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Tonaysia

    this was beautiful i love the ryming and the poem it self keep writing
    The Young One
    ~Tonaysia~

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    I think all your poems are great and this is just another example

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    I think all your poems are great and this is just another example