Excellent poem, i can definately relate, i can't believe your so young, and people say, "Enjoy life while your young, they are the best years of your life". I hope not... Keep writing!

you say that this poem goes everywhere...but it also puts into words what most ppl go through on a daily basis....and i love it!!!! i hope that you can pull urself out of the depression that ur in right now...im so sorry that u hafta see the "depths of hell". keep up the writing though...like you said, it helps.

luv ya lots,
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WOW!!! this poem is awesome and touched me very much!!!! I too have felt a different level of down lately and have not been able to put my feelings on paper because of it..so i know how tough it can be..but YOu did a brilliant job of expressing your emotion!!! Its powerful..And it means sooo much more because it came from soo deep within you!!! AMAZING work!! amazing!!!
Please take care and stay safe!
luv elizabeth

I'm not going to say "I understand omg I know I know". Obivously because I dont know, you seem to be a very strong person, its so easy to die. Keeping yourself alive is a difficult enough task without having to deal with everything else.. Im not going to say im sorry for you, or that I pitty that your so self-destructive, it wont mean anything at all. But there is one thing I will say, and that is life may not get better, but suicide is the ultimate form of greed, living through pain and abuse, and suffering, in the end, it may never get better, but in the end you'll know you faught, and that by fighting, you came out on top.

this poem is like.... kay i had it..um,, its like all of your very best poems rolled into one!
keep on fighting babe. you have so much potential to really amount to something in life. luv blarg

Wow...a lot of emotion went into that. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem I really appreciate itm especially from such a renowned poet as yourself...

you definitly don't need to work on this! its amazing. i feel worthless and unwanted a lot of times too. don't let it bring you down! you rock!
xo-Brittany-ox