Comments : Beaten, Swollen Chest; Rape to Detest

  • wow.......this poem was brillaint....well written x it brought a tear to my eye......im sorry about your lost x i understand how you feel x keep writing im looking 4wrd 2 reading more of yr excellent poems x natasha x
    (can u plz comment and rate min? )
    yet again thnks 4 sharing such a brill poem x

  • omg very sad..I feel bad it happened to her..but this was a really good poem..I like your writting.. at any rate good job and thanks for sharing..keep writting ^_^ 5 outta 5 for sure!
    Ur friend
    Shannon