Keep writing poems like this you may just stop someone from killing themselves. If you'd like to talk e mail me at brat_child_892000@yahoo.com

I have to say im really impressed. You understand so much at such a young age! keep it up.

wickd poem. really liked the lines:

'For all those whose hearts have drowned in tears
Don’t give into death
If your suffocated by your fears
Ill give you my every last breathe'

as it shows so much hope throughtout pain and sorrow. wel dun!!! :)

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What a wonderful poem. It has such meaning, so thank you and your poems for brightening up my day!

xx - Kalah