WOW this poem is brilliant!!! Loved the way you put it together, it feels like the kind of poems where you write from really deep within....anyways...brilliant job, like ususal!!!!!
luv liz

this is a really good poem. keep writing.

Amazing Poem, I liked it a lot, perfect ending... Keep on writing

Wow... this piece is absolutely phenomenal. you're poems never cease to leave me in awe. awesome job!

you have to read it twice to really "get it" but all in all i really like it!!luv blarg