Comments : The REAL Factors Of Life...

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    I agree with so many aspects of this poem, I don't know where to start! Agreed I'm a little drunk, but sometimes you need a little altered reality to appreciate the truth in someone else's poem. This is a great poem, you have taken my thoughts and made them coherent...thats a good effort!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Nah it's more of an angst-outlook to life. I didn't want to outline the good, I thought it might be seen as contradictory.
    I was thinking, at the time, to make another poem along the same lines with simular setting as a counter-attack of this one (outlining the good).
    Thanks for the perspective though :-) plus, be weary of reading my older poems, they can be pretty crap!