This is such excellant writing! i love every inch of this. Cracking stuff!

hey love the poem i was thinking that he other person was dead for some reason and it was kool finding out i was wrong in the end (not many things that are like o kool i'm wrong! lol) but ya this is a great one. and thanks so much for commenting on so many of my poems your such a sweet heart! thankyou thankyou thankyou! keep up the writing looking forward to reading more of you poems!

~lil slam~