Your poem is really good.

great job thankz for commenting on my poem ill have to add you to my faves to keep up with your poems-krystal

heys its not half bad! i can really relate to this (short) poem. i can't wait til you put more up, i'm looking forward to them.

Thanx for all ur comments!!

hey i good i think that this poem was good for being the first

~~JENNIEN~~

This one was good but I can see that you are just starting out. Very raw poem . I liked it.

it is kuel i like it

hi i think this poem is good and it was nice talkiing to you

i think this poem is good

Nice work..really well written...goes straight to the point and gets it across so smoothly. I love it...it speaks what i have felt...so well!
Keanna
xx

GREAT JOB its good for a first poem keep it up buddy :p