great poem

Well here's some advice for you...

KEEP WRITING....

i really enjoyed this poem, dont listen to what people say about ur poetry, never doubt urself for 1 minute...even if someone does not like your poem, never change the way you write because someone doesnt like it...you have talent obviously and if someone has something different to say...so be it. i like ur poems they are awsome....keep up the AWSOME job

Hey, I think your poetry is really good. Please don't let Tessa get you down. She's just the type that is insecure about herself and has to pick on someone else to feel better. No worries! Gotta believe in karma. She'll get what's coming to her. Meanwhile, don't let her stop you! You have a lot of potential and I really hope you keep writing.