Very nice poem

Your are a great poet! keep it up!!!

Marie

wow. Good job! Really great job! It seems so deep. Its a great poem! Great job and keep it up. I give it a definate 5! Great job! Keep writing because i love your work!

ooooh, spine chillling, i like it

hey good job, i like ur stuff

~lil slam~

Good job!

WOOOOOO!!!!! THAT IS JUST AWSOME! Really great stuff!! Awsome ending and strong all through, very original!!!!
562 000 000 000 000/5
luv kt

hey wow thats powerful
very interesting
keep writing
luv amy