really great poem, i like how you tied things at the end about what she thought she was and why she had to die, really emoional least what i thought!

~lil slam~

I luv this stanza:
"To my best friend i guess I'm sorry
But you walked away from us
I couldn't carry on alone
Now I'm just a box of dust"

I especially like that last line. Beautiful work, Kal, as always, but don't leave bcuz of all these jerks there are people that love u! Take Care, Hun, Luv U, //ari\\