I really enjoy this poem, its very well written and good, keep up your wonderful writting! if you could, would you comment on mine?
Thanks,
Sarah

"Well slap my untanned gut and call me sally,"- hahahaha.. that made me laugh.niice

Haha THat was funny nice job!

Lol
this poem made me laugh SO HARD!!!
i had a sore stomache afterwards.......keep up the good work
5/5