that was good even if u wrote it at 1 in da morning.lol

Short and simple, well written. It was just perfect in the way it says so much with just a few words.

xx - Kalah, Take Care.!

That poem was really well written. Not even close to s.hit. It had the same theme throughout which made it more interesting to read. Great poem
Keep writing.

-Ann

this poem is really good. definately not s hit

i dont think is shyt at all i think its good. great poems. i like all of yours keep writing your very good. comment on some of mine when you get time.