that was a good poem. i liked it. i gave it a well deserved 5.
i just wanted to thank you for commenting on my poem. it really meant a lot to me to have someone give me advice to try and help me feel better about myself. thanks again and awesome work on the poems.
*sarah

A carefully crafted scene, beautfully worded. Seems very mysterious and intriguing, especially your "fountains of aging youth," and "gardens of deadly bloom". Now why didnt I comment on this earlier? A great piece.

wow, deeply written, you have a great talent, another 5/5. luved the idea behind it, can relate maself. keep it up! and stay strong

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