Very nice poem.. you wrote it so well and it was so amazing! :) Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot to me. Take care and keep writing!

Aswesome poem, and thanks for the comment

Ooh, how the intrigue of illicit love tempts us all. Well, some of us. Another beautiful piece with some interesting concepts.

You appear to be quite the deep thinker, Sarah.

Wonderful poem, absolutley wonderful. Thanks for you're lovely comments. :)

Take care always,
xx - Kalah

anotha brilliant poem. luvd the lines

Theirs a life in every hidden face
A heart in every covered grace

take care lu -x-x-x-