Its get agen very good. if you want to improve it have a look at some of the rhythms in a few lines but in my opinion it dosent need work. if u feel it does tho trust your instincts.
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Its get agen very good. if you want to improve it have a look at some of the rhythms in a few lines but in my opinion it dosent need work. if u feel it does tho trust your instincts.
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