this poem did'nt seem to focus on any one thing. but i think it is beutifully simple in its complexity!

I love it. I think it does focus on one thing. By the way thanks for the poem you sent me!

Yo Blarg, the poem is focussed on how sometimes the facial expressions of others can inhibit us from talking to them and thus, letting destiny work it's magic through human interaction.

Obviously... : )

Very unique piece - i love your original style Kevin you have some real talent!

I really liked this. I admire the symbolism and desired text you create in the piece, and I also really admire your style and format of writing. I really like the subject of this particular piece, and the way you worded is is really lovely and creates an intriguing effect. I really admired the lines,
"Hard eyes make destiny sweat"
and
"we cause a stir
make pupils daggers
as if a passive look does matter"

I thought those were really lovely and I really admire the choices of symbolism and comparison. Well done