damn girl that deep

Argh, had a brief premonition of seeing this poem on somebody's suicide note.... Simply written but the lack of elaboration seems to make it deeper. Well put.

If you ever kill yourself, don't leave that poem next to your bed. It shall SCARE me.

Cheers.

P.S. Not genuinely expecting you to kill yourself. Er, please don't. Ta.

I won't kill myself! lol I think it was all the reading of the notes that i had read on the website and HEALTH class (grrrr =-x) lol no i have a wonderful b/f and GREAT families. thanx for the comments

Damn its a very good poem but deep

This is so darn sad, but beautifully conveyed! Awesome job on this poem! Keep writing!

Few words ... but full of meaning.

Deep, very deep. But great work! This SHOULD be a 5/5, i rated it a 5.

Well keep up the good work!

Chelsey

I really love how you wrote this. I write usually suicidal poems, or just sad poems. I thank you very much for commenting on my poem. It meant a lot. But I really love how you write all your words with a 'kick'. 5/5, Great job!

Wow

this left me speechless

its sooo awesome
i absolutely love it!
comment back!

This is very wonderful the line are deeply touch my heart wow thanks for sharing this poem u make me sad hehe

Cute......it relates to me a lot....but it's in an opposite problem......but i was the one who cut

xxleisaxx