yay intelligence. That's alwayz nice to have. Lol. Well.... your big words didn't knock the sense of meaning this poem had away and the meaning tself was quite nice. Interesting format...

Aken Sol

Hmm...short yet sweet and powerful. I loved the images you gave out with the description, along with the word usage. I found it very adorable, in my mind. :)

This poem is so amazing, I really liked it. It's so original, and well written. I loved the way you expressed your love, and it kept my attention.

Great job! 5/5