Comments : No Longer (SJ)

  • 18 years ago

    by Superior Jackson

    Thanks!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Superior Jackson

    Thanks!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Beautiful poem
    the last stanza was perfect for this ending awsome job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow! My jaw dropped reading this. It was absoloutely incredible. Beautifully orginally. The rhyming was spot on and it just flowed so well.
    Well Done
    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I loved how you rhymed and your poem was so good. It hold a lot of truth as well. Keep on writing, 5/5