Nicely written. Kind of short , but i still like it! Lets hope that this guy does open his eyes. :)

Take care
xx - Kalah

woow!!! really amaaazing!!!! i love it!
if u have time , check out my poemz!
thanxx

great job, sweet and short. i liked it a lot! cheak out mine pleez! lol awsome job, keep up the good work!