wow this is a really good poem!
keep up the good work
Jade
P.S. My dad left me when i was 6 months old and hes never been heard from since!
I know how you feel!
Jade
x x

I thought it was really good i gave you a 5... i just think you should seperate where each sentence would end and begin, but i loved it...keep it up... =) thanks for you comment... =)