awww don't feel that way about yourself! great poem, and keep up the good work, always remember that beauty lies within....

=) Im male

Though the idea is there.. and it may be how I feel about certain issues within myself...

I just see a lot of girls obsessing over makeup and as you say, the beauty is within. I believe it shows they don't know who they are (sometimes!)

Thank you anyway =P

LMAO sorry! my bad lol great poem tho lol.

Thank you :) Hope you lke some of my others too...

i haven't read them yet... lol can you check out mine?

i read 'em, i like them a lot, i left you a few comments. ^^