Hey there i believe i am the first person to write you a comment. Well done on the poem i could connect with it very well! I think that you have the potential to write excellent poetry if you keep at it!

You are right!!! Racism can be stopped and is a CHOICE not a path of life.
Great poem 5/5!
Mandi

I totally agree with u...Racism really pisses me off...It's so damn stupid to kill because of that
keep it up ;)
5/5

WOW! so wrong..